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18 July 2007 @ 07:23 pm
This Was Harder Than I Thought...  

After everything else we've put them through, I never thought I'd have the hardest time of all writing Lois talking to an unconsious Kal-El about what he missed. It's also kind of funny just how easy it is to hear her in my head. I could probably even act this as Improv if needed. Wow. I knew I loved this character, but sometimes it even surprises me how easy she is to find. *hugs her Lois and Margot in turn* 

Just wow.

Starting at 1,120 now. Plan to get at least 400 words before Anissa gets home. How do I just know I'll be crying when she gets here? Lois Lane, I love you. It'll get better soon, love. Trust me, I know what the future holds.  *smiles, hugs her Lois again* 

ETA: 9:07 EST- Now up to 644 words on Lo. She's started talking to him now, starting with her first thoughts of him. 

Oh, current songlist:

Mandalay-Please (OMG, I love this song!!)
Marion Raven-Here I Am
Donnie Darko Soundtrack-Mad World
Breaking Bejamin-Here We Are
The All-American Rejects-Straightjacket Feeling
Beauty and the Beast TV Soundtrack-Catherine's Lullabye
Matchbox Twenty-You Won't Be Mine
Aida Soundtrack-Written In The Stars
Robbie Williams-Advertising Space
Simple Plan-Untitled
Jude-I Know
k.d. lang-My Old Addiction
Aqua-Aquarius
Christina Aguilera-Hurt
Joydrop-Cocoon
Eva Cassidy-Somewhere Over The Rainbow
Peter Gabriel-I Grieve
Gabriel Yared-An Angel Falls
Jimmy Eat World-23
Fiona Apple-The Child Is Gone
Damien Apple-The Blower's Daughter
Gavin Degraw-Belief

 ETA: 10:22 EST- Taking a few minutes' break. 1,101 words. Talking about how they met and her real first thoughts about Clark. Just got to First Night. Will shortly be talking about the interim between STM and SII. Just hope no one get bored with her one-sided conversation.

 
 
Latitude and Longitude: The Usual Spot, Writing
On the Verge of: creativeWildly Creative
Beautiful Noise: Aqua-Aquarius
 
 
sean_montgomery: Clois - hold mesean_montgomery on July 18th, 2007 11:36 pm (UTC)
When Anissa told me you were going to be writing this section of the chapter, I had a feeling that it would be a little emotionally tough on you. At the same time, though, I knew that there wasn't a better person out there who could write this section. :)

Best of luck on the rest of your work, hon. And if you need any second opinions, I'm here all night. *hugs*
Lois: Lois Kal-El Fortresskalalanekent on July 19th, 2007 12:21 am (UTC)
Thanks, love. I'm up to 353 so far and haven't even gotten to the heart of it yet, so that's a good sign. And yeah, it's a crusher for me right now. And she hasn't even started talking yet. *bites lip* This man had better know she loves him after this. Wow. Emotionally wow.
sean_montgomery: Clois is lovesean_montgomery on July 19th, 2007 01:29 am (UTC)
Darn right, he'd better know! She only lost her voice for him in the last few chapters. ;)

But I'm really looking forward to seeing the results of this emotional outpouring. With you behind the keys, I'm sure it'll be great. *more hugs*
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✰ ❝elliαniα❞ ĸatrine: ¤Lois Flying With Superman¤elliania on July 18th, 2007 11:41 pm (UTC)
[...]about what he missed[...]
wow, this sounds like you're going to make me cry once more!!
btw, Lo, who is "Bos"? (about your e-mail, Lucy, y'know?)
Loiskalalanekent on July 19th, 2007 12:17 am (UTC)
Bosworth. Whatcha think? ;)
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Loony Loopy Lea Lovegood: SR: Flying with Fistchickadilly on July 19th, 2007 12:28 am (UTC)
*snugs* I'm sure it's going to be awesome - I have complete faith in you. :)

Lois: Heartachekalalanekent on July 19th, 2007 12:39 am (UTC)
*snugs back* Thanks, Lea love. It's just...I've always know how much my Lois loves him, but I'm get details now that I never thought about. And bawling my eyes out to the bargain. *LOL* Geez, I love these two.
Loony Loopy Lea Lovegood: smallville: Lois and Clarkchickadilly on July 19th, 2007 12:42 am (UTC)
*snugs again*

Like you reminded all of us a while ago - we know it wil all be okay in the long run.

I just realized I never reviewed the last chapter again - I so suck! It was fab and I got teary eyed for Lois when I read. Not much of a review but it's true!
(no subject) - kalalanekent on July 19th, 2007 01:39 am (UTC) (Expand)
Anissa Royanissa7118 on July 19th, 2007 01:09 am (UTC)
Hey babe - keep on workin' it, and I'll have a really big hug and a smooch when I get home.

*luvs you*
Loiskalalanekent on July 19th, 2007 01:19 am (UTC)
Love you, too, 'Nissa. Up to over 600+ words and still going. Worried I might not get done as much as I want, but I want to get the majority of it written before you get home so we can keep going with the other parts of the chapter. I still have Friday.

*hugs*
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ellalou73 on July 19th, 2007 03:15 am (UTC)
You know having not looked at the other comments at this point and not knowing if it's been suggested, you could do a voice over for Lois talking to him if you really wanted too, it would kind of be fun..but I'll leave that to you...At any rate I can't wait to read this new chappy..
Lois: Lois Lost In Thoughtkalalanekent on July 19th, 2007 04:07 am (UTC)
Might not be a bad idea, Shelby. I might just...
Syd Gillsydgill on July 19th, 2007 03:44 am (UTC)
Okay...this isn't the music thread but I found another one...and I don't want to find the music post:

Nature's Law by Embrace

I tried to fight the feeling, the feeling took me down
I struggle and I lost the day you knocked me out
Now everything's got meaning, the meanings bring me down
I'm watching as a screening of my life plays out

Every day I fight these feelings
For your sake I will hide the real thing
You can run all your life, all mine I will chase

You should never fight your feelings
When your very bones believe them
You should never fight your feelings
You have to follow natures law

I'll live with never knowing, if knowings gonna change
I'll stop a feeling growing, I will stay away
Like a broken record, stuck before a song
A million beginnings, none of them the one

Every day I fight these feelings
For your sake I will hide the real thing
You can run all your life, all mine I will chase

You should never fight your feelings
When your very bones believe them
You should never fight your feelings
You have to follow natures law

I wrote her letters and tried to send them
In a bottle I place my hope
An S.O.S full of good intentions sinking
Will you give it to me, don't make me wait
You built me up, knocked me down
But I will stand my ground
And guard this light that I've found

You should never fight your feelings
When your very bones believe them
If you let them show, you'll keep them
I know your hurt but soon you'll rise again, again, again:.
Lois: Never Forgetkalalanekent on July 19th, 2007 04:04 am (UTC)
Woman, you are the music maven! I thought Caroline and I were prolific, but WOW! Getting both tracks now. *hugs*
Syd Gillsydgill on July 19th, 2007 05:43 am (UTC)
hee hee...

I just like music that makes me wanna write...so I keep lookin! And itunes shuffle is highly addictive *gets gleam in her eye* it's like playing the slot machines! Can you believe I had Nature's Law for months but I hadn't heard it until today! WOOT!

*giggles, hops up and down and hugs Lois back*