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31 May 2007 @ 03:34 am
3,574 Words, 7 Pages, 1 Teaser  

Hey, y'all said you didn't want us to bury the update.  There ya go.  

This is obviously Anissa hijacking the journal and making it a forum for her Voice of Doom.  We have been working our tails off on this chapter and enjoying every evil-cliffie moment of it.  Well, in between Lois being sick and overworked and having a Jor-El attitude in response to that.  (She said it, not me.)

Anyway, progress is good, you're going to want to kill us by the end, and I've been using my sadistic little Chuckle of Doom so much lately even my coworkers are scared.  But for the moment, I think it would be a good idea if I went to sleep BEFORE Abby and Barb wake up and get on the computer.  G'night!

Oh, wait.  You wanted a spoiler, didn't you?

What makes you think you'll get one?

*smacked in the head by Lois*  Guess you get one, then.  Owwww.


“The specs of this yacht call this the Aquatic Gallery,” Riley said as Lois surveyed the huge room.  Her swift glance took in all of its particulars while Riley kept talking.  “Most of us just call it the ballroom.  It’s big enough to waltz in, don’t you think?  Do you dance, Miss Lane?”

“Not with you,” she shot back, and he only laughed.

“You will by the time we’re through,” Riley promised.

...

Luthor gave him a catlike smile full of cruelty.  “My, my, my.  How disappointed your father would be in you.  Jor-El sent you here to guide us weak mortals, to be the light to show us the way.  Superman, savior of the earth, fighter for truth, justice … all that stuff.  Rescuer of kittens.”  Lex couldn’t help snickering as he remembered that early article.  “Oh yes.  All that, and a deadbeat father.  Really, Superman, how could you?  Honestly, not even I pictured you as the love-them-and-leave-them-pregnant type.  No wonder Lois wrote that article about you – hell hath no fury like a woman who gave birth to aliens.”
 
 
On the Verge of: giddyGiddy with Evilness
Beautiful Noise: Anissa's Dad Snoring
 
 
Loony Loopy Lea Lovegoodchickadilly on May 31st, 2007 08:17 am (UTC)
Oooh, Lex is so evil!

(As are cliffhangers - you're getting to be right up there with Barb with the cliffies. XD)

Loiskalalanekent on June 1st, 2007 04:34 pm (UTC)
Actually, it's not something we do on purpose, for the most part! There are times that we don't even consider what we leave off with as cliffies! *LOL* I'm gotten SO upset sometimes that we don't end off with a planned cliffie, and you guys still want to kill us!
Barbara: Evil Cliffie Queenhtbthomas on May 31st, 2007 09:57 am (UTC)
I like the sound of "sadistic chuckles of Doom"! :D It looks like there's a lot to look forward to on Sat. morning!!
Lois: Lex Poutkalalanekent on June 1st, 2007 04:43 pm (UTC)
I certainly hope so! Now if we can just recover from Anissa's ER visit, we'll be on time and have it to you later tonight! If not, can you still beta if we get it in a little later than usual? Say around 11 AM at the absolute latest?
Barbara: Super Beta!htbthomas on June 1st, 2007 04:44 pm (UTC)
Absolutely. I will be waiting and ready. :)
Lois: Barbarakalalanekent on June 1st, 2007 04:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks, dear! We love you for it. And BTW, this really is the section you'll be proud of us in!
sean_montgomery: Lois - gasp!sean_montgomery on May 31st, 2007 10:14 am (UTC)
*mimics the sadistic Chuckle of Doom* ; )
Lois: Hellcatkalalanekent on June 1st, 2007 04:43 pm (UTC)
I take it that we've done our job well?
sean_montgomery: Me-amusedsean_montgomery on June 1st, 2007 07:56 pm (UTC)
Oh yes. And I can't wait to see the finished results. *muahaha!*
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Lois: Lois Kal-El Fortress Hold Mekalalanekent on June 1st, 2007 04:47 pm (UTC)
Re: love em and leave em . .
That's another of the things about this story, the fact that the same lines and actions can still be used but by and to another characters, but changes the entire mood from the original. We try not to use too much the exacts, but even then, we try to tweak it a bit. I think it's one of the thing I love the most!
(Anonymous) on May 31st, 2007 11:49 pm (UTC)
elliania at work
with a teaser like this, what do you want me to say??? I wan moooore!!!
Lois: A Hero Fallskalalanekent on June 1st, 2007 04:47 pm (UTC)
Re: elliania at work
You'll get more tomorrow, silly! And I promise it will be worth the wait!
✰ ❝elliαniα❞ ĸatrine: ¤Erica & Tom ~Hee¤elliania on June 1st, 2007 08:22 pm (UTC)
Re: elliania at work
*is happy*