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25 November 2006 @ 04:26 pm
Very Quick Spoilers for Twenty-Two  
B, you already read this, but it gives the others an idea of where this is going to go. It's not pretty.

“And that’s the first question.  What exactly do you remember, Lois?”

Her eyes narrowed with fury, pure spite in her voice.  “I remembered everything after you’d left.  Everything.

“Are you sure?”

“I remember everything from tricking you into admitting who you really are to hearing your father tell you that yours is a higher destiny,” she spat.  “And everything after that, Kal-El.  I remember twice that night and once the next morning.  I remember you shivering with shock and desire; I remember how dark my hair looked against your thigh.  And I remember how quickly it was all over after you got your ass kicked in that diner and found out about the Zod Squad.”

He flinched, blushing furiously; six years ago, her blunt tone and choice of reminders would’ve made him drop the subject right there.  But Kal-El had been gone six years, had seen his birth planet fractured and poisoned by radiation.  He had returned to his adopted world, the only home he’d ever known, and found it changed almost beyond recognition in his absence.  And he had discovered the love of his life engaged to another man, raising some stranger’s children, and generally going on without him.  All of that might have been enough to break him, but for the hope that she might still love him.  That they might be able to salvage something of their former closeness.

 
 
On the Verge of: busybusy
Beautiful Noise: Crashed (Thanks, Bisty!)
 
 
sean_montgomery: Clark+Book=Booknerdsean_montgomery on November 25th, 2006 09:34 pm (UTC)
*bites her lip and tries not to bounce in her chair* Looks gooooood...
Brian's FanFic Journal: Kermitmr_beeto on November 25th, 2006 09:48 pm (UTC)
*Forgot to bite lip, bounces in his chair*

God, that looks good!
sean_montgomery: Inquisitivesean_montgomery on November 25th, 2006 09:50 pm (UTC)
bounces in his chair

Do men 'bounce' Brian? ;)
Loiskalalanekent on November 25th, 2006 09:55 pm (UTC)
*LOL* 'Gail!
sean_montgomery: Me-Model posesean_montgomery on November 25th, 2006 09:57 pm (UTC)
What? It was just a question. *innocent smile*
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Brian's FanFic Journal: Head Bangermr_beeto on November 25th, 2006 09:56 pm (UTC)
*turns beet red*

Um, No, Um, I meant, Um, ... well, um, not as in body part, um, just, um, jumping with excitement, um, kind of like my 2 year old nephew does, um...

Okay, now I'm channeling Clark Kent...
sean_montgomery: Me-Hysteriasean_montgomery on November 25th, 2006 09:58 pm (UTC)
Oh my Lord, B! You didn't have to ANSWER that!

*hysterical laughter*
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ellalou73 on November 25th, 2006 09:59 pm (UTC)
Hey I love your part of LJ. I love the pictures you have up of Kala and Jason and the rest of them. That's great. I commented on your last chapter but I will do it here too. I really liked it. I thought Lois was going to have big troubles when Richard walked in but she smoothed it out nice.

I would leave you more but I have to go to work, blah. okay write more will yah I want to see what happens next

Ella aka Eviefan
Lois: Partners In Crimekalalanekent on November 25th, 2006 10:01 pm (UTC)
I thought that was you, Evie! Thank you so much! I'm going to Friend you, okay?
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Lois: pic#54417600kalalanekent on November 26th, 2006 12:08 am (UTC)
It'll convert easily to YouTube. That's the only place I put them up at. Put it up as Private if you only want me to see it.

And you think you have it bad? I have to wait until Monday night to get much further than I am. *LOL*
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Loiskalalanekent on November 26th, 2006 12:50 am (UTC)
I like it! I think I may have to leave you a credit in a future chapter because I wanted something playing on the radio that would fit. I may just use this one. Who's it by, bisty?
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Loiskalalanekent on November 26th, 2006 01:21 am (UTC)
*LOL* Very good-looking guy. I really love the song.

BTW, I just let B do a test read on just the intro to our Christmas story. Should I give you a sneak peek? Only you and Barbara will be seeing this other than Noux, since she drawing it.
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